Beware of Love trap

its a poem on pain of love

The pain is there somewhere

The love has passed long gone

Everything is still and silent

The crash of the heart is all that is heard

People say it will be all right

Nothing shall be same forever 

And am not going down without a fight

i wish we could stay together

Everything is lies; everything is dust in the eyes

I want to cry, yell or may be even die

My emotions are not mine to decide

Oh! Why me

Out of all the people why me

Love will not come ever again

He said he just could not explain

Was I just for fame , Where all those memories just a game

Or did I become too much of shame to be joined to your name

Was everything out of pity?

Everyone said I was pretty

Everyone said I was special 

Everyone said I was treasure 

So did you...

I ask my you darling where did I go wrong?

Was I too headstrong?

Was I too loud and impossible?

Was I irritating and unstoppable

We were to be a couple for lifelong

Then I ask you where I went wrong

Why did you leave me when I needed you most?

Why cheat on me was I devil or ghost

I will not fall into love trap again

It is a promise from which I shall not refrain...

Author's Note

please review and let me know of my new piece..:)

Reviews

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you've got a treasure too.................loved your pic..........
I liked + loved = enjoyed......much written......nice....beautiful write........
Everyone said I was pretty
Everyone said I was special
Everyone said I was treasure .........
well written.......you've got a talent you pretty cool girl...

[Cerise]

Aww..Thank you for your kind words sir..am glad you enjoyed it..:)

[Shay]

emotional and sentimental,, i like it

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[Aditi Mahajan]

emotional write!

[Cerise]

Thankyou..:)

[Aditi Mahajan]

:) :)

[Poison Ivy]

great write!

[Cerise]

Thankyou..:)

[R.O.M.E.T.S.I.]

I believe perhaps there is no love without pain, that they are one and the same. But of course, there is also happiness. This poem represents that very acurately. Good job. P.S. headstrong, loud, and unstoppable are not bad things.

[Cerise]

Thankyou for your kind words..:)

[Claire Twinn]

You have captured this phase of grief in losing a love so well, the self-pitying regretful feelings. Personally though I think the person who dumped you was an idiot!

[Cerise]

hahah..lolz..Thankyou for your wonderful words..:)

[de_maruf]

but you can't walk over it
nice writing

[Cerise]

Thankyou..:)

[K-mo]

very good

[Cerise]

Thankyou..:)

[K-mo]

your welcome!

[Abbie]

very relatable. I have felt this way at times, luckily not right now though. This was a wonderful poem full of emotions. Great write. :)

[Cerise]

Aww..Thankyou fro your kind words..:)

[Abbie]

You're very welcome! :)