Memorable Days

The most amazing and memorable days of my life in school with my best friends...

My friends you are my blanket during the winter
You are my ice cubes during summer
Someday when I am alone
I think of all those days gone

Since I keep thinking of those lovely days
They seem like those bright sun rays
Those days I shall treasure
Be it today or forever
Just call on me when in need
You can call me selfish, or it might just be my greed
My life shall be your's ever
I shall not forget you ..nahh...never..

Love for me is you all
Without whom I am sure to fall
Support me through my lonely days
Help me through my naughty ways
I shall be your's now and then
Never ask when
For you know am your's only lady like friend...:)

Reviews

[Criss ;)]

wow, what a nice writin' again...you know what i read yours one after a lon' time...it's nice poem....this;s all about frnds, how you enjoyed with 'em, how you played with 'em, how you spent your every individual time with 'em, how you were their frnds...what a lovely write, you know what you really memorized my those days.......
now plz...don't continue it or else i'm gonna b emotional ....lol

this's a well written piece, the most effective n efficient line that gets entered into my heart is
"I shall be your's now and then
Never ask when
For you know am your's only lady like friend "

what a nice stanza "fancy'', thanks to share such a piece on here with us...especially with me...lol.
lovely write....you did what you wanted to write.....
great job by you :)

[Cerise]

heheheheh...Thank you.....this is one of my oldest poems...written loong ago..it myt nt make much sense...but it does to me...:)...Thank u again

[Criss ;)]

yeah, i did figure it out.....it's a copyright of 2012, but i liked it, yeah i know it doesn't make sense but it's for you......for me, it's an awesome one, because it's what about those days that we can't forget ever.......
it's funny one too here in this line
My friends you are my blanket during the winter
You are my ice cubes during summer

these above lines're also very nice, it's a fun that we do, we did, we done in our past...but some moments we can't forget because it's all about "Memorable Days" :)

[Cerise]

aww..Thank u for being soo understnding...thats very sweet of ya..:)

[Dee Okolotowicz]

Very lovely poem... A perfect gift to a friend.

[Cerise]

Thank you for your wonderful words..:)

[Dee Okolotowicz]

You're very welcome. I'm just beginning to try poetry. I have absolutely no idea what I'm doing yet. I'm reading about it, studying others poetry and then just picking up my pen or keyboard and write. You're poem was something I would have loved to have written for a friend. Again, very nice. :)

[Cerise]

Thank you for your kind words..am glad u hav thought of giving it a try...goodluck with it...am sure u wll cum out wid great pieces of poetry...:)

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy..]

So so so beautiful !!!!

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Welcome :)

[marytownsend]

I really like the ebb and flow of the words in this poem! It reminds me of sitting on the shoreline and watching the waves, surrounded by friends! Such a nice picture! Great writing!

[Cerise]

Thank you so much for your wonderful thoughts..:)

[Shay]

i really liked this. the comparison between friends and blankets during winter and ice cubes during summer was really cute and added a nice touch to the poem

[Cerise]

Thankyou for your kind words..:)

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Lovely sentiment...beautiful....

[Cerise]

Thankyou for your kind words..:)

[Soul Fire]

lovely

[Cerise]

Thankyou..:)

[Soul Fire]

np

[Stanley Wilson]

great work enjoyed it all and the message of friendship

[Cerise]

Aww..Thankyou...:D

[Starr Mist]

I like it a lot! I love friends, and this a very postive poem about them. Great work! :)

Starr

[Cerise]

Thankyou...:D

[Coyote Poetry]

A very nice poem of friendship. Good to spend time with friends. Laughter and long talks are needed in a life. Thank you for sharing the positive poem of friendship.
Coyote

[Cerise]

Thankyou ..:D