When nothing seems to be in your favor you got to sit tight and let everything go smooth.
I abhor my life.. It's so not fair... Life's not great.. People are always late... Nothing happens on time... No one has ever given a dime... Love is never fair... Money is not always there... Don't break the heart, I won't bear... I did no wrong, don't blame just because I am born... Everything sucks, there is no luck... God is always there, but we still dare... Sit tight and let life go on.... Don't sit like a wimpy kid rather act like a don... "Everything will be fine", believe in yourself and your line.... You will do it and you will do it right.. Because it's your freaking life and nobody is going to bite... Move on and be strong... No one will ever point at you...because you are never wrong....:D
"Fairness does not mean every gets the same. Fairness means everyone gets what they need. And the only way to get what you need is to make it happen yourself." This is one of my favourite lines from The Kane Chronicles series by Rick Riordan.
Yes, life is not fair, but there's nothing we can do about it except walk our own paths. I love how you put it so boldly in the lines: You will do it and you will do it right/because it's your freaking life and nobody is going to bite...
The straightforwardness was very striking.
"I did no wrong, don't blame just because I am born" You made me a bit emotional by jotting this piece.
This's a true and a very marvelous emotionally written piece. I hate when someone as beautiful as you feel "Bad and so sad"
I feel the pain the this poem but now i wanna ask first from an angel that hey! Are ya sure you never think of me something like that you penned into the piece that breaking the heart and spoiling the life of angels at all?????????????????????????????????? (coz, i need to know what an angel thinks of me coz, i hate hurting angels)
awww..thank you for such a touching review...hahahah.....dont wrry it was no were related to u/..:P... read moreawww..thank you for such a touching review...hahahah.....dont wrry it was no were related to u/..:P....u wudnt break angels heart ya..how cud this be penned for u den..:P
11 Years Ago
My pleasure!
Ah! Thanks! Now am feeling good that i never hurt any angels hurt, thanks .. read moreMy pleasure!
Ah! Thanks! Now am feeling good that i never hurt any angels hurt, thanks allot.
Yeah! But i just even when i do think about devils crime they're making with angels so sometimes i feel bad and think couldn't i as same as them but then i voice comes from mah heart and says "How the hell you think even how the hell you can compate yerself with those devils who hurt angels and wrench their body at all ... and i feel good and say, Yeah.. am not as same as they are the hell devils.
Well, thanks for making my doubt clear, you sexy angel.
A very accurate and realistic snapshot of the so-called Human Condition...well-voiced, and the ending ties it all together nicely with a note of optimism :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
Aww..Thankyou so much..your kind words meant a lt..:)
life is never fair....it's a challenge throughout our lives.. but we knew that there is always a reason to it and we learned from it ..then go on in the next list of life's journey...
great write...you show great light in this writing..
"Fairness does not mean every gets the same. Fairness means everyone gets what they need. And the only way to get what you need is to make it happen yourself." This is one of my favourite lines from The Kane Chronicles series by Rick Riordan.
Yes, life is not fair, but there's nothing we can do about it except walk our own paths. I love how you put it so boldly in the lines: You will do it and you will do it right/because it's your freaking life and nobody is going to bite...
The straightforwardness was very striking.
for months i was homeless and living on the streets and got so tired of hearing from "friends" that everything would be ok, until recently i became that... ok
this is why i see your words in graphic detail, very nice write!
you are welcome, and...i don't subscribe to those persons who think all poetry must look like their .. read moreyou are welcome, and...i don't subscribe to those persons who think all poetry must look like their expectations, rather...what makes you unique is your personal brand of heart....don't listen to the detractors, do your thing and love it.....great poem
12 Years Ago
awww..you are wonderful..thankyou soo much for your lovley motivational words..you inspire me to wri.. read moreawww..you are wonderful..thankyou soo much for your lovley motivational words..you inspire me to write some more..:)..thankyou again
Hiya fancyfati,
I have just agreed to be your friend & have commenced reading through your writerscafe work. I particularly like this piece & yup you are quite right, life is seldom fair but we have to get on with it. All Good Things, your friend N
I enjoy reading your poems! Life is never fair, and all we can do it to fight for a life... There's no one to blame, but ourselves if we don't try our best. Love the message of the poem! Believing in ourself is really important:D:D
Nice written!