Unforgetable love

Love is not something that fades or that can be forgotten.

Some day when you are alone, think of those precious days
They might have meant nothing to you but to me they were bright sun rays
Knowing you and living with you was the most precious time I had
As always people crib and cry saying it's bad
They don’t know how you ignite my senses
But I keep myself locked and increase my defenses
How could I forget you just because you say
The most amazing time is with you on that wonderful day
I promise to treasure you forever
Don’t worry I will not forget you never
It’s not so easy to forget our love
You shall be like my rock dove
Our love will go on and on
Nobody will be there to divide us 

not till end of my last breathe gone…

Author's Note

feel free to review...thankyou...:)

Reviews

[Tina Kline]

Sometimes its not until we look back on something in our lives and then we appreciate it or them as the case may be. Very tender and romantic, I think.
I like it.

[Cerise]

Thankyou..:D

[Violet Dreams...]

Mesmeric Write

[Cerise]

Awww..Thankyou..:)

[Soul Fire]

Beautiful

[Cerise]

Thankyou..:D

[Soul Fire]

You're welcome

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Hi fancyfati, Has lots of emotion and sentiment and the love you had for him shines through. A little clumsy in places but still a nice read.

[Cerise]

Thankyou :D

[Belinda]

This is super sweet. It makes you remember the best times of your life. something someone should never forget.

[Cerise]

aww...Thankyouuu soo much lady..:D..i am glad you liked it..:)

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Hi there, I think that this is a quite lovely, free flowing mass of exuberance, of hope and promise, and of self-analysis, thank you

[Cerise]

hey....thankyou soo much..:D..your words menat a lot..:)

[de_maruf]

good thinking

[Cerise]

Thankyou..:D

[deepblue04]

this is a cool way to make people think of how good their life actually is, good job!

[Cerise]

Thankyouu..:D..it meant a lot

[Ufi Auttorri ~ Amy C. T..]

That was great! I have some observations, perhaps some things to consider:

- What about a comma between "you" and "never" in, "Don’t worry I will not forget you never…"?

- Would it change everything if you dropped the "...." at the end of each line? I'm sure you really need them.

- Perhaps some blank lines between key parts of the poem? It might help the look and readability.

Thanks again! :)

[Cerise]

ahh..thankyou for your opinions..:)...and those dots lolz its more out of habit and i totally forgot to remove it..thankyou for reminding..:D