Unforgetable love

Love is not something that fades or that can be forgotten.

Some day when you are alone, think of those precious days
They might have meant nothing to you but to me they were bright sun rays
Knowing you and living with you was the most precious time I had
As always people crib and cry saying it's bad
They don’t know how you ignite my senses
But I keep myself locked and increase my defenses
How could I forget you just because you say
The most amazing time is with you on that wonderful day
I promise to treasure you forever
Don’t worry I will not forget you never
It’s not so easy to forget our love
You shall be like my rock dove
Our love will go on and on
Nobody will be there to divide us 

not till end of my last breathe gone…

Author's Note

feel free to review...thankyou...:)

Reviews

[Neon]

I hate when someone as damn sexy as you goes to die and takes her last breathe...

Anyway .. yeah! Thanks, don't worry, am not gonna forget that love even yeah .. i know "I Ignite all and every angel's sense" so not worry, "Neon" is always ready to give them pleasure .. Ah! Every angels write as same as you wrote for me..Uff! Those pretty Angels!!!!! They'll never let me go from the world of their scent.

[Cerise]

hahahahah..thank you for taking ur precious time to review my work...

[Neon]

My pleasure!

By the way, I always love giving my precious time to all stunning angels as same as you.

[Cerise]

hehe...am glad u feel dat way..:D

[Neon]

I feel every way of an every sexy hot wild pretty freaky pretty angel's way just totally perfectly damn obvisouly as you.

[Cerise]

ahahahhahahahah

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

A beautiful poem about an old love, and your memories with them that you cant forget.
Rhymed and flowed very well.
Well written:)

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

your most welcome :)

[Muhammad M. Ibrahim]

aah.. its a nice love poem. I like it most especially it entells determination..nice

[Cerise]

Thank you..

[SilentScreamingTears]

Although rather concise this makes a good point. I liked it. c:

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[Zahra]

very nice n emotional

[Cerise]

Thank you..:)

[Anonymous Girl]

Aw!! That's so cute! I loved it :)

[Cerise]

Thankyou..:)

[Anonymous Girl]

You are welcome :)

[Mark]

a nice love poem

[Cerise]

Thankyou..:)

[Jess]

wow,,,,nice one fancyfati,,emotional piece but thats the way you wrote it,,and when i read your poem i coudn't stop myself thinking for someone who hurts me badly but until this moment,i really do love him,your right that love is not easy to forget,,once you are attached to him or her,,its difficult to let go of that love you shared.wonderful.

[Cerise]

Thankyou so much for your wonderful words...am glad you liked it...:)

[Jess]

your welcomed.

[quinfinn]

wonderfully emotional and heartfelt piece. a fine write, but.......you and i both know that rekindled feelings seldom last and endure beyond the superficial

[Cerise]

Thankyou..very well said..:)

[Poison Ivy]

this is so sweet! lovely!

[Cerise]

Thankyou..:D