The torment and pain has become so normal in day to day life.
It’s just a normal headache all say They don’t understand They don’t know the troubles I go through They don’t know my fears for its very true
My life may seem normal to them But I know the truth Everything is so horrendously horrific Everything looks like it’s against me For life may truly be
Every day I beg to be saved from the pains of life They don’t know I die a thousand deaths a day They don’t know the ups and downs I go through Still they think they can tell me what to do
Life is not a chocolate cake Sweet as it looks from top Is bitter wid in I know better than to curse life beacuse it’s just a slice of my lowlife
But I know at the end of the day It’s all going to be a past For the future have good wishes and happenings And it awaits my pleasure There will be lots of questionings But it all shall be at my leisure
I will pass through it all I know I will And I will do it alone For I need no one but myself to carry on and on
ohh this is sooo good eh encouraging and powerful!! u r ryt they dnt knw wt u go thru en they judge from your outside, yeh i know u ... they think they knw u better than yo self! bt all they will ever knw is yo outside... tell them!!!! i love this poem en thanx for sharing
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
I agree with your words..very well said....Thankyou for your wonderful and motivating words..:)..am .. read moreI agree with your words..very well said....Thankyou for your wonderful and motivating words..:)..am glad you liked it..
this poem definitely has a lot of emotion- sadness, hopefulness, loneliness, etc- i enjoyed the first stanza and the fifth one ones the best and brought out the most emotion and thought. i hope you know that you do not have to go through life solitary :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
Aww...that was very sweet of you to say such wonderful words...Thankyou..:)
I can feel the pain you felt sometimes, and it actually tear me apart as well... Sometimes we just can't stop ourselves to wonder if anyone really understand us, and I believe it's a No, however at the same time, there's a lot of people willing to help us no matter what! Anyways, a really nice poem!
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
aww....very true.....evn i beliv its no..:).....yup u r ryt..thankyou for your wonderful thoughts.... read moreaww....very true.....evn i beliv its no..:).....yup u r ryt..thankyou for your wonderful thoughts..:)
although it has a lot of feelings of frustration and disappointment, you have given hope in the future. this makes it more charming than the sorrow feelings while reading all through the start of the poem...
i have really enjoyed readsing it..