MY VISIBLE LAD OF DREAM

The definition of my soul-mate

My dream lad has come again
He saves me from my nightmares
Come as an angel in disguise
You are my balm to the pain

The green blue hue of your eyes
The sparkling balls within
The lips so amazing and soft
Whispering sweet nothings
You are my rainbow come to spread beauty

The hair falling on forehead
Like a devilish pirate come to kidnap me 
From anguish and torment, loving me through my dreams
With an amazing glint and gleam

You are the sunlight of my dark lit life
Come on a horse with shiny white mane, golden red chestnut coat
Running through the wild forest coming with a thud
Come to save me from the horror of life
To calm me and cool me with feathery touch

You are purest water come to sparkle my life
I surrender to you, for I want no one
Your touch gives me life
I don’t know what I would do without you

Reality has come with a bang
Don’t worry my love, I will be back again

You shall be my death and my life
Tomorrow we shall be together without restriction and grief
I shall be yours again, however brief.

Author's Note

tell me how u felt..:)..thankyou

Reviews

[gombeggar]

good poem...but to this day i've always wondered about 'sweet nothings' if they're nothing perhaps i've been getting them all this time and just not noticing...hmm

[Cerise]

ahh...thankyou..:D...welll sweet nothing means more of love talk but they dont carry any importance.....hehe..well may be you will notice in future..:)

[Anonymous Girl]

It's romantic. It feels romantic. It's just ROMANTIC!! So cute!
100/100

[Cerise]

hehhehe...aww thankyou..:D

[Anonymous Girl]

Lol, you are welcome :)

[Pól]

Being a bloke I don't usually warm to White Night on Shining armour type stuff, but this was lovely and captured my attention immediately. Well done + thanks for sharing.

[Cerise]

Ah. Thank you :D for taking time to read.

[Pól]

np, FF

[Cerise]

:)

[Mia]

Lovely flow. This is a very sweet poem. Are you in love? This poem drips of love and sweet tenderness and that is always wonderful to see! It warmed me up. Thank you for sharing.

[Cerise]

awwwwww...you truly made my day...hehe no. Thankfully as of now not fallen in that trap of love yet..:P.....thankyou soo much for your lovely review..:D

[Mia]

I'm glad :) to have made your day! Love a trap never... it’s more like a treasure. Not always what you expect but always valuable.

[Cerise]

hehe...i shall rembr your words...ths days thr seem to b far more broken hearts than true love..:)..well lets jus hope your words come true for me..:)

[Mia]

Fingers and toes crossed!!!

[Cerise]

lolz..:)..ditto

[khalid]

i felt that i have enjoyed reading it. i can understand it as something all girls dream of, the dreams knight on that white horse..very nicely written. great poem for a promising poet

[Cerise]

aww...thankyou..:D...hehe am lucky enough to have your views on most of my works...its been pleasure knowing u