MY VISIBLE LAD OF DREAM

The definition of my soul-mate

My dream lad has come again
He saves me from my nightmares
Come as an angel in disguise
You are my balm to the pain

The green blue hue of your eyes
The sparkling balls within
The lips so amazing and soft
Whispering sweet nothings
You are my rainbow come to spread beauty

The hair falling on forehead
Like a devilish pirate come to kidnap me 
From anguish and torment, loving me through my dreams
With an amazing glint and gleam

You are the sunlight of my dark lit life
Come on a horse with shiny white mane, golden red chestnut coat
Running through the wild forest coming with a thud
Come to save me from the horror of life
To calm me and cool me with feathery touch

You are purest water come to sparkle my life
I surrender to you, for I want no one
Your touch gives me life
I don’t know what I would do without you

Reality has come with a bang
Don’t worry my love, I will be back again

You shall be my death and my life
Tomorrow we shall be together without restriction and grief
I shall be yours again, however brief.

Author's Note

tell me how u felt..:)..thankyou

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Romantically dreamy , softly steamy, sadly gleamy...:)...........

[Cerise]

thank u....

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)................

[Shay]

so romantic, i love it

[Cerise]

Aww...Thank you..:)

[MOON]

Lovely write with a touch of sadness.

[Cerise]

Thankyou..:)

[Neville]

The very fact you have had 12 previous reviews for this work suggests that there is an interest in your writing fancyfati - Are you into rap by any chance? All Good Things, N

[Cerise]

lolz..thankyou ..:)....noo gudness...am not into rap..:)..did u reali thnk i was in it..:P

[Neville]

I'm not sure, there was something about your style that made me make that association. N

[Cerise]

ahhnn..no probz....its gud to gt different opinions for once...:)

[Neville]

You sound like a veteran. If so, why have you not reviewed any of my work?

[Cerise]

lolz noo..nothing like dat..i will surely review your work give me some time..:)..just stuck in something..:P..

[Ufi Auttorri ~ Amy C. T..]

I agree with the other reviewers. I think this is a very good poem. I liked it a lot. Also, I think you like men with blue-green eyes (hazel?) as I seem to recall reading it in other works here. :o)

[Cerise]

Thankyou..:D..it meant a lot..:)..ehhe..yaa i truly love buish green eyes...not exactly hazel...hehe..may b you myt have read somewhere.. thankyou again..:)

[afra]

well done ...amazing write

[Cerise]

Thankyou..:)

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My dream lad has come again
He saves me from my nightmares
Come as an angel in disguise
You are my balm to the pain
The most lovliest beggining of a poem! Loved it! It was sweet but sad. 100/100 Keep writing!

[Cerise]

Thankyouuuuuuuuuuuu....:D...your reviews truly get a huge smile on my face..:)...

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I'm glad I made u smile. One small smile makes your day! And you're welcome! :D

[Cerise]

eheh..:)

[Emma Lee-Riviera]

Pretty! ^-^ The ending was kind of sad, but it was still really pretty and flowy. :) Excellent work. Keep it up!

[Cerise]

Aww....thankyou soo much..:D...it meant a lot..:)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Well I felt slightly sad I guess for the horse as some cruel person died its mane! lol
No I was sad as it felt like a yearning for something the protagonist cannot get in life. At the same time they were looking forward to the dream so pehaps were resigned to only dreaming-again a sad position unless a choice that was made. The poem flowed well with good emotion. The line 'I don’t know what I had do without you.' does not appear to make sense so maybe review it?

[Cerise]

Hehe..thank-you so much..:D..I will try to change it :)

[Dayran]

A encounter with the dream relation that promises remedy but will, on its return, carry us to new heights of the relationship.

[Cerise]

Thankyou..:D..it meant a lot