MY FANTASTIC FANTASY ISLE

A peek into the castle of my dreams

It’s vivid and erotic
It’s sublime and hypnotic
I see you calling my name
With a million dollar smile
Running to catch me in your arms 
Welcoming me to our surreal isle
It’s a world that surpasses the grandeur ever heard or said
It’s a dazzlingly supreme magnificent castle beautifully widespread
Uncountable maids and horses with golden mane
The royal silk draperies and the most eye catching fountain
Everything was eye catching even the gorgeously mouth-watering man
Brown hair falling over eyes which hide blue green hue so divine
I was in love and I have to tell was all I could think
But before I could say there was a splash of water in a blink
And I woke up drowning in my own sweat on my very own bed
All I feel now is exhausted and half-dead

Author's Note

Comment what you feel..:)

Reviews

[Ufi Auttorri ~ Amy C. T..]

I feel... like it was a great roller-coaster write! :) The take off was smooth and polite but the middle was scarey with those wild antithetical gyrations. However, in the end, I was able to get off the ride and walk straight without falling down. Let's do it again!! :D

[Cerise]

Awww...Thank you for your wonderful review..made my day..:)

[Sheik]

The all caps title is awesome. I'm reading your works from oldest to newest, the same order I read everyone's. This sounds like a wonderful dream. I remember when I used to post stories about dreams I had. Maybe I shouldn't have deleted those...

[Cerise]

Aww...Thank you again for takign time to read and review...it means alot....well u can repost it again..:)

[Renée]

What I feel...
first I feel..nice anticipation, sensual surroundings...but then there is a interruption like a waking from a dream just as it is coming to the best part !
leaves me wishing I could go back to sleep to find that place ( ;

[Cerise]

Aww...Thank you for such kind words..:)

[khalid]

i feel a mixture of feelings here. some feelings of love and passion mixed with wishes and hopes stoped by frustration, it is really great to gather all of those different feelings in one great poem..

[Cerise]

Thankyou again..:D...for trying to understand my poems so well

[Brownie]

beautiful... makes me remember my dream, the one that left me smiling hours even after i woke up... thank u , u just gave words to those fading visuals.

[Cerise]

Aww..well am glad..:)