Sad memories of loneliness

Sad memories of loneliness

A Poem by Fanciful Goddess
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Sad memores and its loneliness..

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Im dreaming of you .
Im dreaming of love.
With love there is a
lonely lonely heart,
to be healed and rescued.
Lonely lonely heart is a sad sad song.
Its soo lonely it burst your heart like an icy spike,
chain that sqeeses and wounds your heart.
If not loved in return.
It leaves an eternal scar.10
A scar that never heals.
It haunts you in sad sad memories of loneliness and
of pain.
You feel like nobody understands you with half a*s smiles.
You feel all alone.
You feel defeated and usless without the one you love.
The sound of lover's laughter and the nonromantic saying
love is a waist.

© 2010 Fanciful Goddess


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I liked the end. But i thought the repetative words were a bit much.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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