My Fart Smells Better

I love Happy Bunny...So I wrote this poem...it reminds me of what he would say...lol

 

 

My fart smells better.

like roses in a meadow.

In A mythical, magical world of wonder and beauty.

I am sunshine on a cloudy day.

I make rays of light shine down from the heavens.

I bring a blood red blush to the moon.

I make flowers wilt at the sight of my incredible beauty.

Dont you wish you could be like me?

Of course you do.

Cry a river and get over it!

Author's Note

Enjoy!!

Reviews

[crow]

hahahahahahaha!

[kewlbluetiger]

ROFL! I bow down to your cute farts! There's a strange twist on this I can't quite put my finger on... Like the stiff jab at the ending with the final line. It's got punch to it!

[Momo the Elf]

haha nice! very creative take on things, and i like the wordings you used :) i love happy bunny~ ^_^

[Flo]

A very interesting piece, I couldnt really put my finger on what to decide, pretty confusing i must say, trying to bring an oxymoron in the topic that farts smell like roses, wow, pretty confusing, I've seen mind boggling stuff, but this...eh, you got me still confused, full of thoughts that this poem is full of vanity and selfishness.
Mind boggling poem!!! xD
P.S. I love those bunnies

-Flo

[Donovan "Grey Wolf" Go..]

wow cool poem, and the bunny is funny.

[Third Grace]

The beginning is crude then the middle of the poem is lovely then back to the rudeness. Reminded me of someone very vain, who thinks very highly of themselves, yet the way they treat others shows their true colors. Very amusing poem.

[Lunar Lightning]

I think the flowers wilt for another reason, but that's just my opinion. This was a very... Intering peice, as most of your's are. Not something most people would write, which I suppose is a good thing, and it flowed well, good wording, save for the first two lines, but that's probably because I'm into being extremely proper and talking about things like... involuntary bodily functions... isn't something I'm very interested in. Though, overall, good piece, I liked the ending line particularly. I recomend "cry me a river, build a bridge, and get over it" though.

Luna

[Chaos Complex]

That truly was epic... great job. lol

[Rima]

funny and unique
Didn't expect that

[MusicJunkie66]

lol that was funny, I love Happy Bunny too, I have one of his calendars =)