Misojimisaki

I wrote this watching Lucky star anime...I used the Misojimisaki as a name ..from the title of the song ...I thoughtit made it catchy.

 

"Misojimisaki"

 

 

I love you Misojimisaki
My love,you are the wind beneathe  my wings.
My guide through the darkness unknown.
My Misojimisaki.
Oh where can you be?
We've been drifted far apart.
Cuz destiny has'nt reached it's full course.
The war has drifted you away from me.
Oh my Misojimisaki.
Where are you Misojimisaki?
I met you and fell in love.
So endlessly.
So deep.
If I love you so then I should have you.
If I can't have you then take this dream from me now!
Don't let my dream break.
Misojimisaki love is so lonely without you.
Never let me out of  his  heart.
Oh Misojimisaki.
My love Misojimisaki.
Where are you Misojimisaki?
Could you be on the moon somewhere?
Somewhere over the sea?
In an enchated meadow?
Where oh where can you be?
Misojimisaki.
My love keep me in your heart.
Let my tears end.
Let this heartache be taken away.
Never let me dream .
So I wont be hurt in the end.
Misojimisaki.
My love is coming back to me.
Misojimisaki.
I love you always and forever.
My Misojimisaki
Take me to my love.
Misojimisaki.
Let us be.
Free to love.
Misojimisaki
This story needs it's happy ending.
Will it ever come?
Oh please, let it come.
The happy ending.
Misojimisaki.
Under the moon I sing  a lonely song.
Waiting for you.
Misojimisaki.
Return Misojimisaki!
Soon you come finaly to free me of this
loneliness.
My happy ending has come.
Finaly.
Now I can sleep and be free to love.
Forever more.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EX9ambpxFVs&feature=related

Reviews

[Momo the Elf]

wow~ very nice write here! i love the way the poem flows, and i like the repition you used with misojimisaki. the ending i especially liked, and the feeling and emotion carried throughout the poem and shone through your wording... if that makes sense lol. anyways, good job! :)

[Texas]

The repetition's good, just try to space it out evenly. It's nicely full of emotion.

[Aldora Sparrow]

Repetition is a powerful thing and you used the title well. I am not familiar with Japanese, but what does "Misojimisaki" mean? Please, you have wonderful things to say, but why not let the eye be lazy and appreciate it without glazing over? Stanzas, please

[Donovan "Grey Wolf" Go..]

wow thats really cute.
Nice poem.
Saturns right it would be epicer in japanese.

[Taylor H.]

cute poem. how do you pronounce the name though?

[Saturn's Lover]

It would sound better in Japanese lol

[Allison]

This is cool. I hate love poems and stuff like that, but you made this one so good that I like it. ;)

[Hannah Monttkomepy]

This is a very nice love poem. I love the emotion you portrayed throughout.

[Sseoni]

Cute poem! I liked it! :D