Brighter than the sun..glow

Short poem bout love

Singing into the night.

I sing a love song.

Brighter than the sun.

Love's Mysterious glow.

Shines down on you .

destiny follows this Mysterious light.

Reviews

[Aldora Sparrow]

Interesting. Your style really is unique. It sort of dangles a seemingly obvious meaning, but when you go to touch it, it just evades you. Nice

[Allison]

PandaChan5 was right. It's really interesting. I love how you write love poems and stuff, but they aren't gushy or anything like that.

[Sseoni]

Interesing, but good poem. I wonder how a love song can be brighter than the sun... Or are you saying that love is brighter than the sun? Or something like that?I'm a bit confused. Anyways, it was a good poem. :D