My love is beautiful..Beauty of love

I wrote this in a guys point of view...

 

 

 

 

 

My beautiful love.

The beauty of love.

Love has a physical body.

My love is beautiful.

She is the beauty and the warmth

of the sun.

The soft,caring ,beautiful moon at night.

The twinkle of the stars thats in her eyes.

Enchanting me.

Take me to my love.

To her arms.

In her heart is where I want to be.

If I lost you now.

I'd die.

I'd be in living hell.

Without you.

Reviews

[Aldora Sparrow]

Pretty good. Favorite line: "The twinkle of the stars that's in her eyes" May be cliche, but it flows really well the way you put it. Nice