Sweet smiles

A beautiful presious smile you cant help but love.

Your sweet smile.

Work like a  spark of light.

That illuminates my soul.

There is no corner to dark Place

your love cannot fill.

Your sweet smile sends smiles all through me.

I try to hide my affections for you.

But can't.

You've got my love.

Reviews

[Masaking]

It's always about LOVE
isn't? lol

[Apathy To Empathy]

As always, you write beautifully.

[karmic]

Peace created by the affections of love. nice work.

[Aldora Sparrow]

Strong. A little cliche, but overall, pretty good

[Susan14]

wow that is really good, and epic it's short but still has such emotions in it and it still gets its point across, this is an awesone job

[Donovan "Grey Wolf" Go..]

wow thats really epic.
Its short but it still gets its point across.
Awesome job.

[Allison]

Dude, this is good. It's so short, but it has so much meaning behind the words.

[Momo the Elf]

wow~ i don't think i've ever read something that could capture the complete essence of a love's smile, but you did it! nice wording, too :) great poem~

[Pookie]

Cute!! i like it.

[Rima]

Simple, cute and straightforward
I like it!
It flows very well and gives the reader a warm feeling
Nice job!