Sweet smiles

Sweet smiles

A Poem by Fanciful Goddess
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A beautiful presious smile you cant help but love.

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Your sweet smile.

Work like a  spark of light.

That illuminates my soul.

There is no corner to dark Place

your love cannot fill.

Your sweet smile sends smiles all through me.

I try to hide my affections for you.

But can't.

You've got my love.

© 2016 Fanciful Goddess


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It's always about LOVE
isn't? lol

Posted 12 Years Ago


As always, you write beautifully.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Peace created by the affections of love. nice work.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Strong. A little cliche, but overall, pretty good

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow that is really good, and epic it's short but still has such emotions in it and it still gets its point across, this is an awesone job

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow thats really epic.
Its short but it still gets its point across.
Awesome job.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Dude, this is good. It's so short, but it has so much meaning behind the words.

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow~ i don't think i've ever read something that could capture the complete essence of a love's smile, but you did it! nice wording, too :) great poem~

Posted 14 Years Ago


Cute!! i like it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simple, cute and straightforward
I like it!
It flows very well and gives the reader a warm feeling
Nice job!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on January 11, 2010
Last Updated on April 12, 2016
Tags: love, spark, light, dark.dark corner, soul

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Fanciful Goddess
Fanciful Goddess

myrtle beach, SC



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(ABOUT ME) Brandy Nicole Taylor June 27,1986 Brown hair Brown eyes 5"1" I'm 25 years old -------------------- (´-`).。oO( Oops I farted ψ(`∇&ac.. more..

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