Cresent wand

I wrote this listening to Carry , Sailormoon song...

Here I'm standing in the night.

My cresent wand ,the only light.

alone against my darkest fears.

But I sense my friends are near.

Evil queen I will defeat!

I'm scared but I'll make it.

With the power of love on myside.

I cannot lose.

I'm scared but I'll make it through.

Just as sure as the sun will rise.

I'm the beauty.

Your the beast without love.

Your the one taking lives .

That I cannot stand.

I will fight till this war is through.

I will win.

Your the the heartless one dose not

see it coming.

I will fight till this war is through with my cresent wand.

Evil queen I will defeat!

 

 

 

Reviews

[Ruby Moon]

just one nitpick... is it suppose to be "your" or "you're"
your as in your stuff? or you're as in you are something something?

[Undying Glory]

i like this poem, it's very vivid and cool...nice