Even in the freezing,stormy night.

Even in the freezing,stormy night.

A Poem by Fanciful Goddess
"

Wishing to be with the love of your life,that you'd do anything for.even in a one heart given situation.

"

 

I wish on the cliffs of the sea .
Please tell me,oh winds that
sail across the ocean.
At the far of the horizon.
Looking up at the unreachable
empty sky.
A bell echoing through the darkness.
The road leading to you is far.
Even in the freezing ,stormy nights.
I will be on an endless search for your love.
I'll cry forever without you.
I travel dangerous trails to be your love.
Even in the freezing ,stormy nights.
I'll journey to the ends of time.
Your my happiness in this empty universe.
This dangerous spell thet fell upon me.
Is unbreakable.
Stronger than any power.
I see  shooting stars.
Trying to bring a romantic scene for me.
So to win your heart.
Endless adventure and danger is ahead.
Not to mention I could have my heart broken.
Left to bleed.
In the freezing,stormy night.
The  songs in my heart are all about you.
And my endless love.
Songs so sad,and theres one after another.
I think maybe this night you'll tell me "I love you".
Night after night I wait  for those words.
My heart is breaking so unbearably.
Im always thinking you'll never love me.
Even in the freezing ,stormy nights.
I will be by your side for always.
Even if those words never come from your mouth.
Tears flow to the sea.
The salty, unsweet sea of broken hearts.
My tears will venture.
Looking up to an unreachable night sky.
Will you ever love me?
I'll wait as long as it takes.
Even if it's no.
I'll still be there,and love you.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

 

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

© 2010 Fanciful Goddess


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Wow, very moving. I could almost feel each one as you described it. Nice shivers. Just as a suggestion, you should make more stanzas for easier reading because my eyes wandered to the wrong place a few times. It's a good poem so I think it would help to make it easier for the lazy eyes XD Otherwise, very nice and natural

Posted 14 Years Ago


I found that this was a moving poem! Very cute and emotional! :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow... It's so moving.... It actually makes me feel a little bit guilty... for not saying "I love you" back. Of course, one has to wait until those words are true. Lying would be worse.
((Geki, don't feel bad! I really care about you! I'm just not ready to love... ))

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow I love it its the exact feeling im trying to portray to my girlfriend thanks.
Awsome poem

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

simply put, it was excellent! :) it was full of beautiful imagery and deep, meaningful lines. very well written, too! i especially loved how you sneakily tied the title into the poem ;) well done! i always love reading you work, and i am never disappointed ^^

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this very awsome!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dude, this is crazy good! Like, in my mind's eye, I can see the cliffs, and the sea, and the sky and everything! Good job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That hurt! wahhh!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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