I hate my love's lover

Being in love with someone that love someone else and the persons not even nice to your love.

I love him but I want to kill her.

She is going down.

She's soo lame.

She has my love by the heart.

I want him so bad.

She came broke my wishes.

she broke my dreams.

She broke my hope.

She broke my everything.

She put her my heart in a blender.

Will he ever see the light .

He's to good for her.

He maybe too good for me.

Why do I have to go through  such pain.

My love too.

You caused my love such pain.

That you will pay.

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Sseoni]

Wow... such intense emotion! I really liked this poem! Great poem! :D

[Tara Ghorm]

It makes me sad because I've gone through stuff like this too! Trust me, deary, the best thing is to move on. I made the mistake of still going after him, and he left me high and dry. =_= Still, a neat poem and a great way to express how you're feeling.

[Undying Glory]

wow the emotions here are very vivid, i can clearly imagine the scene in my head...great