I gaze at the moon,dreaming of a kiss

I gaze at the moon,dreaming of a kiss

A Poem by Fanciful Goddess
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A girl in love dreaming of a kiss under the moon.

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I gaze at the moon.
Benethe a starlit sky.
Dreaming of a sweet kiss.
Never ending.
The song my heart makes.
Will last forever.
Never ending love is an endless song.
Starlight kisses made under moonlit sky.
Will never end.
They'll be forever an eternaty.
 

© 2009 Fanciful Goddess


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Fanciful Goddess
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Cute! I loved the color added to it for some character. I also really liked the comparison between love and a never-ending song. Pretty creative. Apart from the misspelled "beneath" it's all ready to go. good job!

Posted 15 Years Ago


What a cute poem! I really liked it! Especially the way that you express the emotion! I really liked the way you compared love to an neverending song! Very expressive and well written! :D

Posted 15 Years Ago



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