Romeo & Juliet

About Romeo and Juliet ...Inspired Taylor Swift by love story and parts of Romeo & Juliet. (^_^

I'm your Juliet.

We are of a forbidden love.

Little did I know, you were Romeo.

You werethrowing pebbles.

Daddy said stay away from Juliet!

I was crying.

So I sneak  out to the garden to see you.

We keep quiet,cuz were dead if they knew.

Cuz your my Romeo.

My daddy said stay away from Juliet!

Now I lay with you dead in my arms.

Tear were falling.

I was sobbing.

I dont wanna be along.

Romeo Romeo Romeo?!

I cry outloud.,tears soaing your beautiful face.

I wipe away tears from your face.

Flash backs come to my head.

All those beautiful words you said were so beautiful.

I was crying, begging you please dont go!

Cuz you were Romeo and I was your Juliet.

Daddy said stay away from Juliet!

What's in a name?

That which we call a rose by any other word, would smell as sweet.

And I wake for this?!

Oh my breaking heart!

Stay,stay for me,Romeo; a moment stay.

Fate marries us in death,and w are one.

No power will part us.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Hope u you enjoy..try t ignore mistakes.

Reviews

[Aldora Sparrow]

Very nice! A age-old story and popular new song molded together to make such a nice poem that brings a new perspective on the angsty tragedy. Apart from some grammatical errors ("You were throwing pebbles" and "I cry out loud, tears soaking your beautiful face") this was a very nice thing to read in my procrastination. haha. Keep it going!

[Sseoni]

I love this poem! Romeo and Juliet... excellent writing! Creative and inspiring!
Fate marries us in death, and we are one.
No power will part us.
Those are my favorite lines! Amazing! Those words... they're beautiful! Wonderful poem! :D

[Apathy To Empathy]

I really enjoyed this. Very sweet and loving. Hope you post more soon!^^

[Momo the Elf]

nice twist on a good song... personally i like thsi poem more than the song. ;) the last line was very powerful. amazing write!!!!!!! :)

[Texas]

Nice combo of the two. I was acutally putting it to Swift's tune while reading it. I like it. Great job.