O lovely night

I wrote this poem inspired by the song of "O holy night"...

 

                  Oh lovely night.

           The stars are brightly shining .

        It's is the night of our true loves birth.

               The thrill of your kiss.

             A new and glorious feeling.

               When our love was born.
            I hope our love will never end.

                     Oh night divine.

           Let this be my fairytale ending.

          O please lord let this be forever.

                         Amen.

 

 

Author's Note

Enjoy

Reviews

[Sseoni]

Wonderful mood that you created here. I loved it! Since I've read so many of your poems, I can really, really tell that you're into writing about romance, love, ect. If you want to capture your reader's attention and keep it, you must be passionate about your writing! After reading so much your writing, I can tell that you are indeed very creative and connect with your writing on a very high emotional level. Amazing poem! I loved it! :D

[Fran Marie]

A nice take on the song in a version of love~I like it~Well DonE!

[Momo the Elf]

love this poem, and i like the twist on "o holy night" it gives the poem a vague sense of familiarity while still enabling it to capture the essence of the mood you are trying to create. great job, and awesome poem, as always~ ^^

[(Super) Heroes Never Di..]

i feel that way when its nighttime, especially midnight on a full moon. i love losing myself in the stars and the sights. nice job :) i loved it and i can relate to it well.