My heart wilted away

To in love to live without your true love.

My heart wilted away.

Just as a rose wilts and dies.

Without you,i will die.

My beloved.

Reviews

[Tiffany]

Really nice piece of writing. I love it when words puncture my soul. Powerful. t.

[Momo the Elf]

wow! i love how you managed to incorporate such deep meaning into a short little poem. very strong emotion, great writing style... wonderful job~ :)

[Claire P.]

i love this, it has alot of feeling, and unfortunatly, im all to familiar with that feeling.

[Sseoni]

I love how you compared your love to a withering rose! Excellent poem! Wonderful metaphor! :D