Bloody ballerina from hell

A demon ballerina lures victoms to there death by her beauty.

Im the bloody ballerina from hell.

Im drippin blood in my black tutu.

I dance my dance of death .

To the songs of the dead.

I put on a rockin show.

Blood  flies  every where.

On the stage I dance upon.

My beauty allures the unsupecting victom.

I make them dance to their death.

O cruel fate lies on my stage of death.

They'll be thy minions.

Minions of death.

Im the daughter of the grim reaper.

I'll Bring you to your death so blindingly.

Not knowing what fate lay befor you.

I'll take you to my enchated garden.

I'm the beautiful bloody ballerina from hell.

I shall take you there.

With a dance so rockin.

You'll drop dead in love.

Im the bloody ballerina from hell.

You'll be there soon.

A funeral of roses fall upon thy stage.

Bloody petals stained by the blood of the thorns.

Under the darkening sky.

Theres weeping of the dead souls.

That lie here forever more.

Never the less pray for those lost souls.

For they know not,what they do.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Look past mistakes.ENJOY!!!!

Reviews

[Tallulah]

I love this so much. The title really drew me in because i'm a dancer who loves anything dance related. This has such wonderful descriptions and imagery. It's a very entrancing piece. It kinda gives me the feel of a rebel ballerina, which i love.
A funeral of roses fall upon thy stage.
Bloody petals stained by the blood of the thorns.
Under the darkening sky.
Theres weeping of the dead souls.
That lie here forever more.
^That had to be one of my favorite parts. I feel like it was worded very well and it gave the poem a great sense of closure.

[Inci]

nice poem the way it is presented is also great :)

[hannah]

I admire how you've expressed so much using simple words. This is a fascinating piece. Usually, ballerinas are all about grace, discipline and control but your ballerina breaks the rules, a beautiful rebel.

[X_Emo_Princess_X]

This really is wonderful. I love the dark imagery and the word choice was amazing. you truly have a talent. maybe you should consider writing a horror story. I truly can't describe how awesome this poem was, that's how great it is. Kudos!

[deeps]

This is so amazing! Awesome read
Has a wonderful flow to it

Im the daughter of the grim reaper.
I'll Bring you to your death so blindingly.

I just loved this line the best.
Awesome write.

[Sseoni]

Oo, very interesting poem! I liked it! Greatly written, detailed, and descriptive! Fantastic poem! :D