Fairies kissing in the moonlight..(short version)

Fairies kissing in the moonlight..(short version)

A Poem by Fanciful Goddess
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Two faries are kissing in the moonlight.theyre love is forbidden.

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Two fairies kiss in the moolight.
They are so very in love.
Teasing eachother.
Back and forth.
Chasing what was eternaly theirs
They'er tongues fought back playfully.
In the moonlight.
In love till the end of time.
Knowing what lies tomorrow.
When they wake.
The  fobidden love that lay tomorrow.
Their love is kept seceret from all eyes
 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2009 Fanciful Goddess


Author's Note

Fanciful Goddess
It's raining fire and pandachan5 unknowingly helped me with this poem....o and im making a longer version as u can see from the title

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awwwwwww thats cute!

Posted 15 Years Ago


Beautiful poem, great imagery, I love it!

Posted 15 Years Ago


Nice poem! It was awsome. You only had a few minor spelling errors. They'ers to theirs. Toungues to tongues. Faught to fought. Otherwise, the poem is beautiful!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WOW! I love it so far(since you're gonna make a longer version)! I'm glad that I helped you. Your poem is very passionate and extremely cute! I love it!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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