Call For Life

It sprung up and just somehow seemed so true.

Aye life, thou stroppy beast

Wink once and dance a dunce.

Glance back, thou now at least;

Forgone are thy mischievous puns.

Lest I peek and see thou ceased,

A handful of dust in a matter of months. 

Reviews

[Gaurav]

It is a wonderful portrayal of life - engraved in waiting for the death. Thanks for sharing.

[Kiran]

Thanks a lot for the review.

[ExquisiteEyes]

This is really nice. Not many people use old English these days

[Kiran]

thanks a lot dear. means a lot.

[Sreenath]

extremely well written... well somehow i feel i don't deserve to review it coz its worth for expert analysis... nice poem

[Kiran]

thanks a lot for the review. :)