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It'll be our secret, I swear I won't tell.
Its too late already, I'm under your spell.
They won't have to know whats really going on
They don't have to know where the lines have been drawn.

I know you feel it too, theres no need to lie
I know you feel it too, because I can see it in your eyes.
Theres nothing to hold us back, nothing to hide behind.
All I want is you, I have no doubts in my mind.

Stop over thinking it, stop being so coy.
Trust me when I tell you, this can't be destoryed.
This can be simple, no drama, no tears.
Peace without fighting, worries, and fears.

Can you see it yet, its really not that hard
We can toss away our uncertainty without any regard.
Maybe its a bit obsessive wanting you like I do.
Maybe I'd be better off if I forgot about you.

You're stuck in my head though like a cheesy love song
Even though I hate it, I can't help but sing along.
Thats how it is now, I can't fight it anymore
I need you in my life, just like you need me in yours.

Reviews

[GamingGal]

Pros: I really like this poem, a lot. It has a great rhyme scheme, and I love the topic. Absolutely adore it. Most of the lines are the same length, which helps it flow as well.

Cons: At first, I would have suggested cutting down the length of a few of the longer lines, but enough of them are long to where it's fine. So, no cons really.

Overall: I really like this poem, good job :)