Smiles

Smiles

A Poem by Tallulah
"

He makes me smile....

"

He makes me smile

 With simple words

Makes me feel beautiful

Even though I know I'm not....

 

He makes me feel important

Makes me feel like My opinion matters

And that I'm not alone

 

Even on the grayest day

With a word

He can make me smile

Make the sun appear

And make it seem as if the clouds

Were never there.

 

He makes me smile

And I long for his embrace

But he's to far away.

Yet even with this

Great distance between us

He has the never ending ability

To make me smile

© 2009 Tallulah


Author's Note

Tallulah
I have no idea wgere this came from....What do u guys think?
With love forever and always,
Tallulah <3

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That was such a sweet poem!
You portrayed the feeling really well, and it was one that I could definitely relate to.
I loved the ending, especially the last 2 lines:
"He has the never ending ability
To make me smile"

Thankyou for bringing a smile to my face!
~Paper Hearts

Posted 15 Years Ago


Hey......we guys will do anything to make you girls smile. :) this poem made me smile.

Posted 15 Years Ago


I love it, very cute, great job! ♥

Posted 15 Years Ago


its a lovely little ditty and long may he have the ability to make you smile , give him a big kiss and thank him for cheering you up for us will you ?

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Tallulah
Tallulah

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Hi! My name's Tallulah! I'm a 16 year old girl. There's not much to say about me. I like to write, draw, read and run. I love music and am trying to learn to play the guitar....failing at it though. I.. more..

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