Doesn't Exist

She wanted something to believ in....

Why do I even bother

When I know angles don't exist

And that I'm never gonna reach heaven

Because I dont't have wings of my own

 

Never going to be good enough

Never going to be able to rise

Above the ground

And have some sort of hope in the world

 

Right now I have nothing to believe in

And I'm searching for someone to care

Because right now

I'm wandering aimlessly

And  I don't believe in anything.

 

Give me something to hold

To grasp

Something solid

I need something to believe in

Someone who actually cares.

 

Author's Note

...eh i felt depressed....

Reviews

[Kenya J]

Great poem.... full of emotion.

"I need something to believe in
Someone who cares"

I'm not sure if I'm grasping this correctly but; but it seems as if you're saying that you need someone who cares in order for you to believe.
My friend, you need no one to care for you as long as you care for yourself and love yourself. As long as there is you behind yourself you should be okay.

[theludus]

yes, it's loaded with sincere emotions, and that's what poetry is about. And the exploration of these things brings you to a place where the choice is yours. Life is light and shade.

Enjoyed this.

[UpComesDown]

i like it. it had poweerful emotion. The sense of longing really got to me. I relate to it on different levels. good job!

[Tanya]

This is so sad. It has true emotions in it. Good job.

[Lexi Nicole]

Aw, so sad Tallulah. But very well written. There's a real sense of longing in it.

-Howl