Bored of this Game (He always Looks Back prt 2)

Bored of this Game (He always Looks Back prt 2)

A Poem by Tallulah
"

One day when he looked back she didn't turn to face him...

"

He looked back one day

And she didn't turn

To smile or wave

She had gotten bored

Of playing this game....

 

His grin faded

Jis heart ached

He couldn't see her gorgeous face

he never wanted this game

Of cat and mouse to ever end

 

She pulled away

Distanced herself

All while staying close

But to her this game

Was over

 

He still saw

A glimmer of hope

And a chance to recapture her heart

But everyday

When he looked back

She turned away

No smile

No hand raised to wave

 

Healways lookeds back anyways.

 

© 2009 Tallulah


Author's Note

Tallulah
I'm not allowed to say my writing is bad anymore so we'll skip that part this time

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I love this!!! It is truly wonderful, and I like the lesson that certain people could learn... :) No your writing is not bad at all!!! I'm another person who won't allow that to be said (although I do say that of my own writing), I'm sort of a hypocrite! I REALLY like this!!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


Oooooh! Shut down XD Great job, really adds to the story behind the first one :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


I still can't believe you turned such a cute, sweet poem into this. Proof that you can't really pull yourself away from sad writing, huh? XD Anyway, I really do like this one. You did a really good job with it

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on April 28, 2009
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Hi! My name's Tallulah! I'm a 16 year old girl. There's not much to say about me. I like to write, draw, read and run. I love music and am trying to learn to play the guitar....failing at it though. I.. more..

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