It was Illegal

She wasn't suppose to do it but she just couldn't help it.

No she wasn't suppose to do it

It was illegal

Against the law

But it was soo tempting.

How were they gonna know if she did it anyways?

They wouldn't be able to tell

She was gonna do it any way....

And if she ended up in jail

Hopefully she'd be able to say

"It was worth it...."

And wouldn't want to cry.

Author's Note

hehe don't ask. Its not very good but it was written in like 5 minutes so yeah...
<3 Tallulah

Reviews

[N]

Wow, it's hard to believe that you wrote this in five minutes. It is extremely good.
It was short, and simple, but it was very well written.

"Hopefully she'd be able to say
"It was worth it...."
And wouldn't want to cry."

Great ending. Very good job with this.

[Archipelago]

this is very good, especially for being written in 5 minutes. if you do elaborate on it like everybody else is saying, i would recommend that you don't add any details about the actual crime. this poem fits for so many different situations and it would limit its meaning if you specified what was illegal. right now it's universal, because so many people have been in that situation before. my favorite lines were "Hopefully she'd be able to say/"It was worth it...."", which sums up what this means for me.

[Crazy Cat Man]

Can you stop saying that your writings are not very good,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,Just becuz you wrote it in 5 minutes,,,,,,so what........it's still very good!!!!,,,:)

[Amber Nicole]

It could definitely do with more of an ending but what is written is still pretty good. I enjoyed reading it.

[Lexi Nicole]

I like it, and I agree with Aveira, you should expand on it.

-Howl

[Winter Poison]

I AM NOT GOING TO BE SOMEONE'S PRISON B***H.

Very funny, I like it. XD

[Marlena]

I think you should add on to it, make it longer and add some more description. Good start tho :)