He Always Looks Back

He would always look back to catch one last glimpse...

 Every time he begins 

To walk away

He has to turn around

Take one last glance

At her gorgeous face.

 

he drinks in her features

Memorizes them

Saves them  for when

He's having his own

Personal rainy day.

 

she just looks

Back at him obliviously

And simply smiles 

And waves.

 

And everyday

He turns away

But he'll always

Steal a glance

He'll always look back

To see her gorgeous face

She'll smile

And wave

And when he turns away

She notes in her mind

That

He always looks back.

Author's Note

had it in my earth science notebook for months unwritten with only the title finally got written cause I was bored in class. What do you guys think?

Reviews

[Drakana Wind]

That is soo sweet!!!! You captured the emotion perfectly. I just want to find that girl and ask her if she likes him and try to set them up or something.

The only thing I'm not sure about is the breaking up of the stanzas. The varying length doesn't work for me, but then, I don't think that if you divided them into even stanzas, it'd work (especially since it could only work out to two thirteen line stanzas). So, I guess, never mind about that.

Anywho, I love it.

~Drakana

[Crazy Cat Man]

You are humble writer......... you should pretend to be bored in a classroom when you sit at home writing poetry :) That's real talent to write something like this out of whim without thinking about it and analyzing it so much.

this is a great lil romantic poem. :)

[deeps]

I really like this write
I can feel all the emotion penned
This has a wonderful flow to it as well.
Wonderfully written write.

[Lexi Nicole]

About time you wrote this XD
I kept seeing it fall out of your book, looking at the title and wondering what you'd do with it. This is so cute! I love it, it's one of my favorites by you. And don't forget to fix those typos that computer caused :D

-Howl

[Wunderlich]

This is well written and has a good flow. Nice job :D

[Marlena]

Really cute and sweet, made me smile. ^^

[Emmie Girl]

I like it. It reminds me of my life right now. Its very realistic. Nice write!

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[Changed to a New Accoun..]

this was cute... its like how every new relationship starts..."ooo he's cute" or "damn she's hott" lol haha jk nice poem tho