She Didn't Have A Reason

She sat in the dark, pen in her hand, searchign for a reason. She found none.

She sat alone in the dark

She wasn't suppose to be awake

But she didn't care

It wouldn't matter soon any ways.

The pen clenched in her hand

Her eyes shut tight

Closed off to the world

She was looking

Searching for a reason...

 

She couldn't find one

She knew she wouldn't

Her soft sight

And her pen

Scratching against note book paper

Was the melancholy music

That filled her small room

 

No one would care

They wouldn't even notice

The sun would shine bright

With her gone

That's what she told herself

 

Pain

She couldn't feel it

If she was dead

And the people who

Tore her apart

Couldn't reach her where

She was going

She didn't care if it was hell...

 

She was searching but

She couldn't find a reason

To keep her alive

For another sun rise

And when the sky turned pink

And the sun appeared

All that was left of her was

A small note that said

 

"I couldn't find a reason...."

 

And She was gone.......

Author's Note

random six minute poem.... Kinda depressing but I like it. What do you guys think?

Reviews

[deeps]

Wow! I can feel this powerful emotional piece here.
This is wonderful, i can really feel the pain.
I have been through part of this.
This is very well written and expressed
flowd nicely down the page.

This is awesome to be written in 6 minutes
you have a brillant mind and pen.
keep writing always.

[Drakana Wind]

You're right: it is depressing. And I do like it. I like the way you wrote it; I like how not being able to put her finger on the reason became her reason. It makes the poem and the suicide note all the more deep and depressing (I almost want to critically analyze the suicide note). Good work!

[MadasonBlue]

Great poem, hair stood up at the end.

[Philip S.]

very nice, i got chills at the end.

[Buni]

very powerful emotions there! like it alot! good read!

[Lexi Nicole]

I love it! There's so much emotion in it. Great writing!

-Howl