Next To You (jealousy)

Always hidden in the shadow.... She simply stands behind you. She just can't help but to be jealous...

Why is it

Everytime I'm next to you

I always feel

Like I'm worth less

Always forgotten

Like I'm a shadow

 

I'm forgotten

Invisible

Nobody sees anything

I do

Not when I'm next to you.

 

I hate to admit it

But I'm jealous of you

You're amazing and talented

And it makes all my accomplishments

Dimminsh disappear

and seem like nothing

 

I just hate it.

All the feelings

And worse of all

It makes me hate you

 

I hate

Standing next to you

Makes me feel like I fail

At everything I do

Just cause you're better

 

All this time

I'm right behind you

Hidden in the shadows....

Author's Note

oooh i have no idea where this came from...I'm in a random mood today.

Reviews

[Wingless Angel of Dream..]

i like this, it makes me see this girl standing next to like the top guy in school. he's the best everyone sees him and she looks at him with this really sad face as everyone notices just him. I really like this poem, it has a lot of those leftout emotions. i can feel them coming through, and that's actually kinda scary. but it's really strong work. :D

[Kaitlyn]

I completely agree, I feel as if I can see the 'invisible' girl standing next to the popular guy, just waiting for someone to notice her and what she is doing. I loved it!

[LoLo]

I know exactly what you mean.. :(

[Last Lying Look]

I understand the emotions in this piece very well.
" I just hate it.
All the feelings
And worse of all
It makes me hate you"
Great write!
-Elissa :)

[Lexi Nicole]

I really like this, there's a lot of feeling in it. I've definitely felt this before, too. I think most people have, which makes this piece brilliant. Everyone can relate to it. It's very powerful, great work!

-Howl

[Melissa Kesead]

I have felt like the emotions in your poem before. Thanks for sharing.