Goodbye Kiss

Given a chance

At your Dreams

Would you kiss me goodbye

And forsake me to the darkness?

 

One final though

Lost in the dark

Wanting to bring it out to the light

Would you kiss me goodbye

Given the chance at  all that you've missed

 

I wish I could say you wouldn't

Leave me for a dream

That will never come true

That you would always stand by my side

But I know better then to think

That I'm that important to you

 

 

So before you get the chance

To abandon me forever

I'Il give you

This Kiss GoodBye

 

Author's Note

I don't really like this on and I'm not sure why. What do you guys think I can do to make this better?

Reviews

[Lexi Nicole]

I like it, but I agree that it's not your best. I'm not really sure what it is, but there's something about it that's a little off, if you get what I mean. Like something's missing, but I'm entirely sure what. Maybe you need to expand? Use more description?

-Howl

[Frank F. Atanacio]

I loved it!!!!