I Am A Nobody

This is wrote back in 8th grade. I rather like how it turned out.

I am a nobody.

 

I live among you,

But you don't see me.

I see you,

I control you,

But you don't see me.

 

I am a nobody.

 

I am in your mind

And only yours.

Only you can hear me.

I only control one,

And that one is you.

 

I am a nobody.

 

I think for you,

I make your decisions,

I tell you what to do.

I can be good or bad,

A thought on each shoulder.

 

I am a nobody.

 

I am your mind,

Your soul,

Your heart.

 

I am your life,

I am everything you are.

 

I am a nobody,

But I am you.

Reviews

[Tortured in Seattle!!!!]

This poem stands out from the rest because it is describing who you really are but the fact that you don't really know. Great writing! I want to hear more!