Twice

 Twice he looked around him

With dark surroundings he thrives

Hiding behind his umbrella’s brim

He clutches tightly his knives

 

Twice she combed her hair

Walked out to catch the breeze

That’s when he saw her standing there

Between the river and the trees

 

Twice he thanked the clouds

And the rain that poured down

But he hated the crowd 

And the happy faces found in this town

 

Twice she looked at him 

Standing  alone

She saw his face cold and slim

Shivers flew to the bone

 

Twice he counted 

Than walked faster and faster

 

Twice she flew up the steps  

Than panted faster and faster

 

Twice he lost sight of her

Than she was gone

 

Twice she looked around her

Clouds grew apart like duckings and their mom

 

Twice she blinked

Awoke to realize her dream

Was lost and extinct

But then she heard a scream

Reviews

[Voice]

Wow this is a great piece really deep. it's kind of eerie and it paints a picture in the readers head of what is taking place. Great write!!!

Voice