Trapped

Trapped

A Poem by fallen_sueanne
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Sometimes love kills

"

i can't breath cause i know you're there
waiting for me to scream out the truth
my bones are breaking and my head hurrts
but i won't give up to you

the dagger that you're father gave you
when you were just a little boy
it now pierces my chest fresh
yet beholding all my pain

my lips turn blue and lose warmth
my eyes start to slowly haze over
my blood flows all around me
and i can't stop thinking of you

the chains that your brother gave you
when he got out of his prison cell
they brace me down on the floor
i am trapped in my own torment

i can barely see as you stand over me
the bright moon behind you is so beautiful
this death reality is like my nightmare
does that mean im gonna be damned to hell?

you bend down beside me, lift my head
blood-stained flowers are scattered everywhere
you whisper sweet words of our past life
and one last kiss before you push down the knife

© 2009 fallen_sueanne


Author's Note

fallen_sueanne
Ignore capitalization errors, please and thank you.

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WoW, you did really awesome with this!

Posted 15 Years Ago


aw

Posted 15 Years Ago


this is awesome!

Posted 15 Years Ago


Damn...great job, sueanne ;)

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is amazing!
So full of emotion!
Love this piece.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Ok, its amazing I personally love it! please check both my poems out and comment :D

good luck x

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on August 1, 2009

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