maybe.

The way my heart beats when I think of you

The way I smile, just thinking of the things you've said to me

Maybe it's love ~

The way my heart melts when you say my name

The way i miss you when we say good bye

Maybe it's love ~

The way I dream of you every night

The way I get excited when your name shows up on my phone

Maybe it's love ~

The way you make me feel when you smile

The way we cuddle up by the fire side

Maybe it's love ~

The way your presence makes me feel

The way you make me live just to see you

Maybe it's love ~

Or

Maybe I'm just dreaming ~

Reviews

[LauraRenee]

This is relatable to every person... the feeling we have when there is this one person we like... Are we dreaming? Is it love? A strong like? It is always up in the air and tends to fall into just a dream, just our imagination overpowering what is truly happening in our relationship. Great writing!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Filled with so much meaning and many questions... I enjoyed this one its well written out.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A whirlwind of emotion and contradiction, well written, great read.

[Katannaism]

This is really sweet-Though a little bit more description would've made it just really pop, you know? But the simplicity of this just makes this wonderfully exquisite. ;)

[Coyote Poetry]

Those "maybes" keep us guesting. Hard to grasp the truth without taking chances. I like the ending. Sometime life allow us to dream and hope at the same time. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[trainwreck]

This was so sweet. and sad. I really have to ponder what you said.

[Balls:)]

man eevii... i know exactly how this feels, im pretty much going through this with caleb. he's my best friend... but i feel that way about him... but i dont wanna say it's love...
but this poem is amazing

[Ben Taylor]

oh, very well done :) I especially like how you mention "The way I get excited when your name shows up on my phone" because many people don't write in the modern aspects of infatuation, oftentimes. I know that whenever I get messages or texts from a girl I am crazy about my heart skips a beat or two; I just enjoyed the relate-ability of that line.
Nicely written :)

[lawrence bear]

love is mysterious and makes us think wildly, but in some ways you have described what love does to us all, maybe not in those words but in some way. I liiked this write and keep writing, thank you for sharing.

lawrence

[sushi]

Not sure if its love but i really love it....

A cute write. Thanks for sharing...

[Fontane Wong]

It is a really sincere poem. It has sweet lyrics in it, and lots of emotions. And it's so realatable. What a beautiful piece, my friend!