two.worlds.

Day by day,

I long to see you.

I can't stand it,

But your voice pulls me thru.

We're on the phone,

In the morning, at night.

We're talking 24/7,

From dark, till it's light.

But, what's causing this division ?

Baby we're two worlds apart.

How are we even friends,

It's truly a work of art.

Your world is so different from mine,

Your day is usually spent in a club, in a bar.

It's a whole new thing for me,

Too distant, too far.

My world is so different from yours,

My day is usually spent in a new place.

Where I can feel free,

To be myself, it's not a race.

I tried to fit into your world,

Hanging with you and your crew.

But baby it's not my thing,

My distaste for it just grew.

Remember the times I tried,

Tried to introduce you to my world ?

You disliked it,

For christ's sake, you almost hurled.

We're two worlds apart,

This isn't how it's supposed to be.

You don't like my world, I don't like yours,

Hell we just can't agree.

Have you noticed ?

That the gap is too wide ?

I'm gonna have to wait,

Wait until our worlds collide.

Reviews

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

two worlds indeed, Ive tried and tried but now I just wish to crash into yours

[Katannaism]

This has such a forbidden sense to it. Really exquisite indeed!

[Thea Fuentebella]

This is a complicated situation. i imagined how they would they be together when their worlds are like oil and water. it's a frustrating situation and you intensified it beautifully with this poem....
not really sure, but it seems to me that the phrases "To be myself, it's not a race." and "For christ's sake, you almost hurled." were kinda forced to fit the rhyming scheme.
it's good overall. and it ended with BOOM. great write!

[Fontane Wong]

I think this poem is really relatable. You can't change when two people are opposite. I like the ending of yours. This is really a sweet poem. I think this poem show the situation beautifully and clearly. We can't control the luck, it can let both to be together. An fantastic poem written by you.

[mi-chan]

I like how this is different from other love poems- ones about breakin up or loving someone or getting back together. Stating these differences between 2 different lives, waiting "until our worlds collide". *loves it*

[Balls:)]

:)
this is a really sweet poem... you sound like you know what you're talking about and like that, this is a really good piece and i totally relate.
very nicely done if i do say so myself. :D

[Dilan Gray]

I think this poem is really relatable, which I like about it. I think people often find themselves attracted to people who are polar opposites to them and then are disappointed when it doesn't work out. I think you showed this situation beautifully. I really liked it.

[A.Noel]

a definite longing for two opposite worlds to crash together in some way so they actually fit together. very nice

[Coyote Poetry]

Hard when two people are opposite. Most of us can't change the way we think and feel. I like the feel to be with someone and the emotion of the great separation in dreams and life. A very good ending to the poem. Luck may allow two people to fall together. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Just Me]

This poem actually describes me. One of my friends is all into witches and magic and I really don't understand it. Another two of my friends are outgoing and they don't care if they make fools of themselves in public. Then another is all into swords and bows + arrows. I get the sword thing but the bow + arrow thing. Can't understand it. I loved this poem for that very reason.