i.want.your.blood.

For all those times

You caused me pain.

For all the moments

You drove me insane.

For how you managed

To fck up my life.

For the sht you did

To make people hate me.

For how you destroyed

All that I had.

For what you did

Deprived me of a great friend

For the way you forced me

To distance myself.

For the way you threatened me

Saying you'll take my life.

Tell me, 

What does my grades have anything to do with you ?

Tell me,

Why must you make a big deal about my 'A' grades.

Tell me,

Why does it bother you so ?

Tell me,

How do you find me 'obnoxious' ?

Coz right here girlfriend,

You're the obnoxious one.

Coz right here girlfriend,

It's not my grades you should be worried about, but your own.

Coz right here girlfriend,

I ain't the one bossing people around.

Coz right here girlfriend,

I ain't the one threatening to bomb someone else.

Coz right here girlfriend,

I'm not the arrogant one.

Coz right here girlfriend,

I'm not the one with a whole school btching about me behind my back.

You heard me girlfriend,

You ain't Miss. Perfect.

You heard me girlfriend,

You ain't as good as you think you are.

So, for the crap you did to me,

For the tears you made me shed.

For the lies that you tell,

I want your blood.

Reviews

[Maggie]

She's probably either jealous or holding something against you that you probably don't realize or apologized for already. Try asking her why she's mad, but if she doesn't want to talk to you, she's not a good friend anyway. Believe me, there are so many more people out there who can be better friends, even people you don't think would be!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A shocking piece, a rather subjugated subject matter, a fine floe with spared emotion, well done.

[Katannaism]

Wow this is really just spilling with the rawness of this emotion that is absolutely powerful. Although should keep the 'xxx girlfriend....' thing to a minimum. That was the only thing overdid but other than that is just a splendid piece.

[Athena Ramos]

been there! she's just jealous of you! don't bother her! she's not worth it!
just get on with your life and let her be~ be your self ;)

[Calypso]

I am feeling the same. I'm so full of pain and emotions right now. And above all I'm blood thirsty.

[Fontane Wong]

A strong and clear poem! You make the point clear and strong. I like the ending of yours too. An excellent poem!

[mi-chan]

WOOT! go revenge

[Balls:)]

:O
*claps* you tell it girl ;)

[A.Noel]

great power and passion! i actually felt kinda like that earlier tonight cause of some things said to me, so I definitely relate to it.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very strong poem. You made your point loud or clear. I like the directness and the desire in this poem. Some people need to stay to their own business. I like the strong ending and the emotion of being pissed off. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Just Me]

That was really good. What I get from it is a not-so-popular person is standing up to the bossy, self-centered popluar person. Am I right? Excellent. I loved it.