fallen.angel.

He asked me once, "Why are you a fallen angel?"

I gave him my best smile and gazed up at heaven.

"Because I fell from my place, from the perfect world I have created, all because of him."

He asked me once, "What happened?"

I gave him my best smile and placed my hand over my heart.

"He begged me for my heart, he waited, and he pleaded. I gave in, I gave him my heart."

He asked me once, "How did you fall?"

I gave him my best smile and gazed up at the stars.

"I fell in love. Love was my downfall, love destroyed all that I had."

He asked me once, "When did you give him your heart?"

I gave him my best smile and wrapped my hand around the blood red rose blooming so beautifully.

"When he told me his life is nothing without me. When he said that I was his world, his life."

He asked me once, "Where did you fall from?"

I gave him my best smile and gazed out at the vast ocean in front of me.

"I fell from heaven. The heaven that I created, the heaven that was my world."

He asked me once, "Who did you fall for?"

I gave him my best smile and laced my fingers with his, gazing into his eyes.

"I fell for you."

Reviews

[Hidden_identity]

This is amazing! I love it. You used repetition really well in this poem. It's really powerful.

[Michael]

This is my favorite one of your poems.

It very good and it kind of takes both sides, like a guy could be telling it about his asking his girl those questions, or a a girl could be telling it as she is being asked the questions.
Know what I am trying to say?

[lawrence bear]

a touching piece, you have weaved a wonderful tale. keep writing :)

bear