darkness.

you lit up my world, like the millions of stars in the sky

why should i keep on living

when you were my life

you were everything

you were the light of my world

you lit up my dark sky

the sky that ruled my world

you were the stars

shining every so brightly

you told me what love was

you showed me how to love

who to love

you told me to cherish love

you gave me your love

you took mine

i cherished your love

you threw away mine

why did you take away my light

why did you let darkness consume me

why did you leave me here

with darkness in my eyes

Reviews

[Havthoveen]

iz really dark,deep and i love it

[Kiri Nells]

Great write! This is something that many people can relate to. You're structuring is a bit different, but that's a good thing.

[Larrycall]

i love your style of writing very sad but shows clearly how you feel when you write