DEATH

when the wind blows

it wispers his name

when he is crying

or when he is in pain.

 

he smells the sweet honey

On the top of his head

while he am lying here

because he is dead.

 

When his family finds him

lying in the bed

they took him to the hospital

and they pronounce him dead

 

They wished they could say goodbye

before he crushed my head

before they found him lying there

lying dead in his bed.

 

Reviews

[Tori]

Wow. That's deep. Very good, yet so sad. You are a good writer, so I'm unsure why you claim not to be. But yes, very good.

[revenant21]

Really good, I didn't know you could write, Cody.