Suffocating

It's a song I wrote...Just something I've kept in for a long time

Verse One

I take a deep breath

I take that first step

Feel their judging eyes upon me

The demons inside

Are tellin’ me to hide

And keep my eyes on my feet

Don’t you know, don’t you know

this little girl has feelings

Can’t you see the pain in my eyes

Ev’ry night, Ev’ry night

this girl is kneeling

Prayin’ for an escape from time

Chorus

why why oh why

Did I get trapped in this game of life

why why oh why

Can’t you save this little heart of mine

My head is spinning

My legs are weak

My heart is quitting

Oh don’t you see

I’m SUFFOCATING…

Verse Two

Do you hear my cries at night

DO you wonder what’s happened

And while you decipher my lies

Do you feel hopeless

Don’t save me it’s hopeless....

Chorus

why why oh why

Did I get trapped in this game of life

why why oh why

Can’t you save this little heart of mine

My head is spinning

My legs are weak

My heart is quitting

Oh don’t you see

I’m SUFFOCATING....

Verse Three

And as I cry

My tears create a stream

I face the night sky

As I scream

Chorus

why why oh why

Did I get trapped in this game of life

why why oh why

Can’t you save this little heart of mine

My head is spinning

My legs are weak

My heart is quitting

Oh don’t you see

I’m SUFFOCATING…

Things are changing

I am fading

SUFFOCATING....

Author's Note

Tell me what you think. Does it make sense? Is it even relate-able?

Reviews

[lily]

I absolutely love this. For your question about it making sense, it makes complete sense. Your words are very powerful, I think you did an amazing job.

[Frank James]

Very deep and powerful emotional content, I really enjoyed it. Perhaps relatable to few but powerful to those who can