This is a Goodbye

I don't know why I'm still trying

You've obviously given up

I'm tired of all your lying

I know this isn't love

Though your blue eyes are haunting

Your smile's just a ghost

I gave you my everything

But I guess it wasn't enough

If you're going to leave

Just do it now

Never will I be "ready" 

So why stick around

I suppose it's time

I'm sorry that this is the end

This is a goodbye

I hope one day, we will meet again

Author's Note

Okay, Just tell me what you think xD

Reviews

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

this is amazing, i love it!!!!!!!!! keep up the amazing work

[faked.reality]

Thank you! (:

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

Welcome!!!!!! (:

[Bohrium Guy]

I like how this flowed and the poem itself is well projected. Well done.

P.S. On our other project.... Still kinda working on it just still real busy with holiday stufff hang in there.....

~Rob~

[faked.reality]

Thanks! and no problem! I totally understand!

[Bohrium Guy]

Your just saying that cause we are swapping words.... LOL

[Bohrium Guy]

Hummmmm I should buy a song rubber....

[faked.reality]

haha. And Idk what a song rubber is?

[Bohrium Guy]

it was a joke to the swapping of words in another twisted sense.

[faked.reality]

oh lol I get it now... sorry I am like so slow...must be because I'm a blond jk jk

[lostnstars]

I love how direct the poem was, which is quite hard for me to do. If I were you, I would change the spelling of "meat" to "meet". But overall, simple yet bold writing, which i like.
Please keep on writing, you're amazing :)