Angels plight

While the ageless canvas, angels  painted in cherubs light

Beautiful opaque, patinas soft silvery skies

Young-eyed angelic child's heart

Pure, innocence of darkness

 

Angels unseen two shall prevail the skies

Known utterances spoken silence

Vesper knottiness in rise sunsets

lasting seven trumpets blare once again

 

Love heralds in my everything

Soft erodes in lasting song

Celeste lives brought in mother earths totems stays

Lights gathered in azure linings

Reviews

[Sandina]

Hello Deborah,

I have read a few of your poems. They are well written fantasies of love and light and angels from above. You are obviously a woman in love. Good for you. The world is filled with many wonders, some discovered, some yet to come. Peace and long life. Sandina

[J. Marc]

This one is a more conventional telling about love but is nonetheless admirable in all its sophisticated depictions!! Indeed, personally, I have so much appreciated the content of "love is forever" and "Dear my diary", but that does not mean that this one is less interesting. It is just different!!! The first paragraph is particularly interesting for its rich use of vocabulary about light and colours! thank you!

[Zane Mathias]

Wow THis is very powerfull. Send me a link when you wirte I love it. !!!! your words sound as if they came from Poe but a bit happier. Great write B.P.