Gods throw

 

Special cherub  children come to mind, when I think of sight

To share in each morning giving them hopes light

Chance meetings outings never  happened, no more sorrows logged

So I thank you to seeing eye dogs

 

Special communities offering services to them, even in later life

Classes to share smiles and to ultimately care

To share the dreams, hope and fears demising each day

Life returns to each, soft play

 

In the ending of time when the child is no longer young

The beauty is relationships built hearts  strong

Each one needing applique to grow

Offered through the sight given from angel dog, gods temporal throw

Reviews

[Suelou]

Your imagination has always amazed me, sis. You always write such beautiful poetry.

[Tovli]

very interesting delivery, with awesome imagery and allusions that stick out and are very compelling--enjoyed. tovli

[Brett Campaigne]

there are some interesting mysterious allusions ('seeing eye dogs', 'god's temporal throw'). But there is an awkwardness to the syntax and choice of words which indicates that francais may be your premier langue. Though if i were to write something in french, it wouldn't pass for poetry like your's does.

[Steve Thompson]

This poem has a, unique flow to it. It falls off your tung to a silent beat....a quiet beautiful tempo. I really enjoyed reading this, well done!