Angels possesion

 

My angels possession, 'tis the moonlight surname

Each blade of grass shall escalate in equated lasting love

My darling, each breathe you share is eternal hearts above

My heavenly soul feels each esquire gem

 

'Tis the harmony of each petal drawn near

To my soft love we are in romantic reverie

Lasting meadows will house our love

Treasured hidden in centuries my dove

 

Vesper in romantic change

Utopia is enveloped with my true love

Do you feel in twilight my everlasting arms

I shall ride in wings drawn to each plea

Reviews

[Legion]

I like the wording here even if I don't, in general, care for the simplistic rhyme scheme (like rhyming "love" and "dove" for instance). It seems to work here because of the care and quality of wording you used throughout the rest of the poem. Very romantic and ethereal. Good job.

[Angelic Darkness]

I loved it....has a mystical feel. Your words flowed very nicely together.
Like a sway of a breeze...subtle, soft, yet you take notice to it. Keep
up the good work...AD