Echoes of the Heart

What happens when the heart speaks it's truth? Dive into this poignant exploration of emotions and vulnerability.

Behind a mask of serene design,

A heart beats fragile, a soul entwined.

In eyes that shine like stars above, 

A world of tears, in depths of unspoken love.

The dance of connection, a delicate art,

A balance of strength and vulnerable heart.

The yearning to share, to love and be loved,

a risk that echoes, a soul uncovered.

In the silent whispers of the heart,

A cry for recognition, a brand new start.

To be seen, to be held, to be set free,

A longing that echoes, wild and softly.

Author's Note

Hope you guys understand the depths of the poem.

Reviews

[neil]

Fairy
Your poem is beautiful and beautifully written. You definitely have the DNA of a poet!
One suggestion? In line 4 you say "...a depths of unspoken love."
Is that grammatically how you wanted that? I understand what your meaning is but it may be awkwardly phrased.
Maybe it could be "...in depths or at depths or the depths"?
Regardless, your poem is a treasure! Neil

[Fairy]

Thankyou so much for your review.... and also reminding of it... I guess it's a typing mistake which I didn't notice thankyou for telling me I will try to modify it

[Dylan Macadham]

So beautiful, Fairy. You have a new fan😊
Yes, no matter how different individuals are, we all long for the same things in our hearts.
Cheers!

[Fairy]

Thanks Dylan.... I'm really happy to see reviews for my poem 😁

[Dylan Macadham]

You deserve it, Fairy😊

[Fairy]

✨✨ Thanks once again